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Jess714
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 10

0 posted 2001-04-19 08:28 PM

Love can last a lifetime
some last only a month
Some may only be a day

Some get into fights
Some just break up and move on
Others talk about it to each other
Some will say I love you
Some will just use you

Some only wanna be with someone
So they don't really care about the other person
Some may not even recognize that you are using them

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-19 08:49 PM

simple and short.
good job.
keep writing

...?

Rach813
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 30
Maine

2 posted 2001-04-19 10:53 PM

Jess another really good one! I like this one a lot and keep up all your good work! I am proud of you! Really!
I love you sis!
Love Always
Rachel

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-04-19 11:13 PM

hey jess

i gotta say im jealous of you and your sis!!..im the only girl in the family y'see.
but i liked the poem..it was so sad..i hate the feeling of being used by sumone you love..its not only devestating but sumtimes it doesnt go away for a long time.
great read!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

4 posted 2001-04-20 12:11 PM

Love.... this is one of the hardest things to expain...I do believe though that it is love is something strong which lasts....It could be the sweetest thing, it could also be the most hurtful it depends on the both of you in the relationship. The poem is nice though. Keep posting!

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-20 02:49 AM

I liked the poem.
I don't think love would only last a day if it were truly love, but that's my opinion there.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-20 01:20 PM

I liked the poem, but I agree with Javi.. I think that if it was true love then it would take much longer to fade than just a day.
Nicely done, though. I enjoyed the read.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-04-20 07:41 PM

I did enjoy the poem. Good job.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-04-24 05:56 PM

That was a good read. great choice of a topic. thanks for the wonderful read and keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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