Teen Poetry #4 |
The love that can never be |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
With a hope that never falls, She tries her hardest at everything. Including love. Her love for him was as deep as, The deepest river. He loved her but never said so. The three little words that mean the most, He just couldn't say. This became a problem for her. She thought he didn't love her, She broke the chain of love that was between them. Thier love to never be. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
What a sad story... if it's about you, I certainly hope all becomes well soon enough, and you are back on your feet and grinding spines again as soon as possible. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hey, your skull has glowing green eyes too! Written straight from the stream of consciousness, a very honest style. If this is about you, i hope you learned your lesson...about silence, that is.. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done....very well written I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this was sad but sweet i enjoyed it, keep writing. :o) ~AB~ *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
A really sad situation. Didn't he make you feel loved? I personally think this is better than someone telling me the 3 words but don't show it thru actions. Hope things get better "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
This is really sad...If this happened to you then I'm truly sorry... Well written. Keep posting! Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so sad!!!!!!! Nicely written tho!! very emotional i liked it |
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