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where we begin and end
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where we begin and end |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Im at the beginning of my end And the end of my beginning this circle of time this circle of truth this circle of lies that hold me and you A continuation of the beginning A continuation of the end For when the beginning is the end then the end is the beginning |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
IM DIZZY!!! hehe i like this one alot..very cute..and very true (your a great writer!!!) <3 *~KiMmIe~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was a pretty good poem.. I have to admit, it got me confused is some places, but this one made me think, which is always a good thing. I especially liked the last 2 lines. Nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is kind of circular don't you think. I didn't much like it compared to your others, but this one does have some nice thoughts. Maybe you should delve within them harder and explain them a bit better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I really liked this one. I didnt find it too confusing, but I am a confused person, so who is better at understanding confusion? J/K!! Great read! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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