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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“Eternity” Eternity lies with us all We look to heaves gates Or Hell to ungulf us all But I see where true eternity lies Within your eyes It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
WOW! thats all i can say!  ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very beautiful poem here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow...i like it alot!!! gives a whole new perspective on things (atleast in my *lil* head!!!) but that was def. a good read!! <3 ~*KiMmIe*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful thoughts! I like this a lot. Nicely done --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ohhh good thought in here! Loved it...  ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww... hehe... this is so romantic.  Good job.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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