Teen Poetry #4 |
from you from me |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
im a step outside of the spot light because it is to bright for they would be able to see me really be able to SEE im crouching in this shadow as small as i can get hiding from you... hiding from me... im curled into this ball so i cant get hurt hurt from you... hurt from me... im a step outside of the spot light im crouching in this shadow im curled into this ball from you from me “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really great writing |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
you kinda were beating around the bush..which is good in my eye..i like this and i know how u feel (atleast if im interpreting this right lol) *KiM* "i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
oh baby i love you so much and i want to know everythign about you to me you are always in the spotlight as the most beautiful person on stage the only one worth paying attention to i love you *kisses tiffany* keep it up ben redshaw the great and deeply in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like this poem, I think you did a very good job on it. Keep them coming "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I like this poem a lot! Very creative format, great use of HTML. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was good. I enjoyed this. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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