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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-26 02:44 PM


im a step outside of the spot light
because it is to bright
for they would be able to see me
really be able to SEE

im crouching in this shadow
as small as i can get
hiding from you...
hiding from me...


im curled into this ball
so i cant get hurt
hurt from you...
hurt from me...


im a step outside of the spot light
im crouching in this shadow
im curled into this ball

from you
from me


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-26 03:22 PM


this is really great writing  
lonely*soul
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)
2 posted 2001-04-26 03:28 PM


you kinda were beating around the bush..which is good in my eye..i like this  and i know how u feel (atleast if im interpreting this right  lol)

     *KiM*

"i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
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great state of illinois
3 posted 2001-04-26 04:17 PM


oh baby i love you so much and i want to know everythign about you to me you are always in the spotlight as the most beautiful person on stage the only one worth paying attention to i love you *kisses tiffany* keep it up

ben redshaw the great and deeply in love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2001-04-26 06:52 PM


I really like this poem, I think you did a very good job on it.  Keep them coming

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-04-26 08:36 PM


I like this poem a lot!  Very creative format, great use of HTML.  
Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
6 posted 2001-04-27 08:50 PM


This was good. I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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