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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
I look back to see nothing A nothing that was never there Only a pretense of a shadow A shadow that was nothing I look back and i am shadowless I AM SHADOWLESS |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Whoa. You have a gift here. I really had to read it twice to understand it. Good job. I'm pleased to be the first to welcome you to Passions. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
first off i want to tell you that i liked this poem. and welcome to passions. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
im with fozzy..i had to read it twice till i got the full swing (maybe im just a bit on the tired side..either that or im just a bit slow!!!) anywasy i liked it and welcome to passions hun!!! <3 ~*KiMmIe*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welocome to passions!! this is a really great first post, you have a lot of talent. i look forward to reading lots more from you in the future. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this a lot.. this was another one that got me thinking. Nicely done, and I can't wait to read more from you. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wow, the last line blew me away.  I liked that repitition, it gave the line a more accentuated feel. Well done, and welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You have a talent for short poems with deep meaning. Very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
It was short, but it was powerful. Great job! I agree w/ Allan, you do have a talent for short poems. Keep posting! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there, and welcome to Passions. You're going to love it here...these people rock.  This was a very good poem, it brought out the thinker in me...Great job, and enjoy the place!~Carly (And...check your e-mail. )There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Lovely poem I thoroughley enjoyed it! Interesting, intriguing and inspiring, well written! "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to passions!!!! Wow...amazing talent is shining through in your piece!! This was very impressive and i too like a few others had to read it twice to fully appreciate it, but sometimes those are the best poems if they are not so simple that you only have to read it once. This was extraordinary and i am dying to see what else you bring to us!! |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Well done. A very good short poem! Carry on doing ur thing, short poems ^*Bishop*^ |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
hey tifferz u bee a likes showdow likes person likes dude knightlySHADOWS!!! like gee whiz dude  twas a cool poem short and sweetas u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol@scarlet ...for real i have like 3 s/ns with shadow in em! lol :P tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! What a first post to share to us. I t shows so much meaning into it and at the same time so much question to one's self. thanks for deciding to join us here in passions for poetry. hope you enjoy readng as well as sharing your own work "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl...this is awesome SEA |
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