Teen Poetry #4 |
Dreams |
Jess714 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 10 |
Dreams can last forever They may come ture Or they may not Dream the impossible Live the impossible This may be hard But trying is good Ber let your dreams fall short Your passion, Your love for one Changes as time goes on w. dreams And someone! |
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Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
This is great hun! I love it! Keep it up!!!!! Love always me! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"This may be hard But trying is good" these lines say it all beautiful message your're sending to everyone keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like this poem its cute..and so you know (i think your new to passions) you can only post 3 poems a day..for futrue reference ) " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Dreams are a wonderful thing, nice poem. Keep writing :o) ~AB~ *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Enjoyable read.. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice piece. I enjoyed the read.. keep up the great work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I think I detect a relationship of some sort between Rach813 and Jess714... are you guys twins or something? I'm going to constantly associate you with one another... I really like the ending of this piece! Well done! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
Jess-I love this poem so much! You need to keep writing ones like these! And you know who this poem reminds me of! Allan-Yes we are sisters, we aren't twins but we are very close to each other! Love ya Rach |
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