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Jess714
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since 2001-04-17
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0 posted 2001-04-18 06:24 PM



Dreams can last forever
They may come ture
Or they may not
Dream the impossible
Live the impossible
This may be hard
But trying is good
Ber let your dreams fall short
Your passion,
Your love for one
Changes as time goes on w. dreams
And someone!

© Copyright 2001 Jess714 - All Rights Reserved
Rach813
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 30
Maine
1 posted 2001-04-18 06:27 PM


This is great hun! I love it! Keep it up!!!!!
Love always me!

Acies
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2 posted 2001-04-18 06:30 PM


"This may be hard
But trying is good"

these lines say it all
beautiful message your're sending to everyone
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)
3 posted 2001-04-18 06:32 PM


i like this poem its cute..and so you know (i think your new to passions)  you can only post 3 poems a day..for futrue reference   )

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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Virginia
4 posted 2001-04-18 07:29 PM


Dreams are a wonderful thing, nice poem. Keep writing :o)
~AB~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

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5 posted 2001-04-19 03:09 AM


Enjoyable read..

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away
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6 posted 2001-04-19 10:53 AM


Nice piece.  I enjoyed the read.. keep up the great work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood
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7 posted 2001-04-19 12:19 PM


I think I detect a relationship of some sort between Rach813 and Jess714... are you guys twins or something?     I'm going to constantly associate you with one another...

I really like the ending of this piece!     Well done!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Rach813
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 30
Maine
8 posted 2001-04-19 05:27 PM


Jess-I love this poem so much! You need to keep writing ones like these! And you know who this poem reminds me of!  
Allan-Yes we are sisters, we aren't twins but we are very close to each other!  

Love ya
Rach

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