Teen Poetry #4 |
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October 26, 1984 (Allen's challenge) |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA ![]() |
October 26, 1984 Overwelming joy for this new creature we've made Oops! dropped on its head -=haha ok so i really wasnt dropped on my head, but oh well..i dont remember anything from my birth lol suprise surpise... < !signature--> ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
lmao that was funny, i thought it was true until you said it wasnt.. hahah good one DQ! ~JDR< !signature--> "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hehe... this was cute! Challenge well met! ![]() "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
hahaha Very, very, very well done! I didn't expect that! What a twist of event! You started it out so preciously... grasping such a mood... and then OOPS! haha... Nice, Dancinqueen. Keep writing Senryu. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... great twist on the challenge DancinQueen, loved this! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
hehe, very funny......i likes. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Glad to hear it's not true, that can really hurt *gets up off floor* ![]() ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha ha ![]() you sure it never really happened? ![]() j/k sweets i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
HAHA Funny how no one has mentioned the fact that we have no actual memory of our birth, till I read this one. I suppose we all may have been dropped on our heads... who's actually going to tell there kid if they were??? hehe. This was pretty funny ![]() Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hahahaha cute!! I liked this. And you are very correct.... no one knows what really happened at their own birth! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
my eyebrows lifted up when i read the last line...glad that this hasnt really happened to you..gosh it will be pretty traumatizing to have such a thing happen on your first day.... ![]() |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL! Nice surprise at the ending! |
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