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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-18 11:48 AM


for my 600th.... i decided to post my very first post that you  all saw....when i joined.....it shows in its own way exactly how i feel these last two days....enjoy ppl.

Death The only pain

Death the only pain
we can't feel
Telling oursleves we
won't ever die, wishing
we could convince oursleves
that.
Those of us which want to die
whisper words of death upon the
a paper for the ones we plan to
hurt, wishing that we could be
swallowed by the blackest depths
of earth.
Telling how we feel to those who
won;t understand our feelings
Turning to those who say they love
us but really don't
Hurting them, with the pain we can't
feel
Suddenly death becomes and we sink away
from the world we hate so much.

Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
Posts 946
viginia
1 posted 2001-04-18 01:26 PM


I'm sorry that this is how you've been feeling lately, i really hope that things get better for you.  i like the poem, the emotion is really great in this.  email me if you ever need to talk.  oh yeah, and congratulations on number 600, i hope to read lots more of your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia
2 posted 2001-04-19 10:08 AM


Beautiful, Regina.  I really liked this.. it was very sad.  I really hope things get better for you, and I wish I could offer more to help you, but the only thing I can really is a big *hug*.  I hope you feel better.
CONGRATS ON 600!    

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

bigfuzzybear
Junior Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 11

3 posted 2001-04-29 11:14 PM


i remmember this poem and the events surounding it and it makes me cry but its good and know i'm always here for you,
love you,
brad

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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-04-30 09:43 PM


OH hey Brad's a member!
Wow!!!!
well done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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