Teen Poetry #4 |
Faith |
princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
Faith can move a mountain Just the worth of a seed It can part a sea for crossing It can fill a hungry need Aches and pains can pass away The lame can even walk Deaf ears opened and hearing Tongues once silent can talk These things a few of many Miracles faith has done Faith in our Lord and Master Faith in the Holy One Through God all things are possible There is nothing He can't do Only our lack of faith Keeps us from getting through Let us put our faith in action Let us waste no more time For the end is getting nearer Time is short yours and mine You must have faith in peeps.. no matter what! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Knowing what I do about your religious beliefs, I must say this really was a surprise to read from you. The afterthought was something I can relate to completely, and the poem was very well written. Still it sort of contradicted itself in the end, is that something you intended or can you explain somehow? I'm interested to hear. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Faith is such an important thing to have..I like it. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i'm glad that you are writing on different topics as exploring whats more out there as this one i am in that path in finding... but i think you did an awesome job on telling this side of the spritual side cause i struggle with faith..and you are trying to find it great job...i really liked it touching message.. keep writing ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You are really glowing. I loved the poem. I agree with it completely. Well done! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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