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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-30 04:27 AM


Faith can move a mountain
Just the worth of a seed
It can part a sea for crossing
It can fill a hungry need

Aches and pains can pass away
The lame can even walk
Deaf ears opened and hearing
Tongues once silent can talk

These things a few of many
Miracles faith has done
Faith in our Lord and Master
Faith in the Holy One

Through God all things are possible
There is nothing He can't do
Only our lack of faith
Keeps us from getting through

Let us put our faith in action
Let us waste no more time
For the end is getting nearer
Time is short yours and mine


You must have faith in peeps.. no matter what!

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-30 09:55 AM


Knowing what I do about your religious beliefs, I must say this really was a surprise to read from you.  The afterthought was something I can relate to completely, and the poem was very well written.  Still it sort of contradicted itself in the end, is that something you intended or can you explain somehow?  I'm interested to hear.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

vixengrl04
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2 posted 2001-04-30 10:13 AM


Faith is such an important thing to have..I like it.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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3 posted 2001-04-30 12:41 PM


i'm glad that you are writing on different topics as exploring whats more out there
as this one i am in that path in finding...
but i think you did an awesome job on telling this side of the spritual side
cause i struggle with faith..and you are trying to find it
great job...i really liked it
touching message..
keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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4 posted 2001-04-30 10:11 PM


You are really glowing. I loved the poem.
I agree with it completely.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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