Up from under (very short)

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Teen Poetry #4

Up from under (very short)

Hand Me Down
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 32
WV

0 posted 2001-04-18 12:11 PM

Just a little something (dont even ask were this came from):

But those days before I met you, girl
Were just like ice cream falling down
On the shoes of my world
And I'm so happy that your my friend
When were looking
Up from under bayblon.

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-18 12:27 PM

I liked this a lot. very weird, but very good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-18 12:32 PM

This seems very spontaneous... Nice job. Very interesting...

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-04-18 01:35 AM

i liked this one...short but great...like a nice little thought..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-04-18 03:51 AM

diffierent but interesting...
nice job on this!!
and keep writing

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-04-18 01:00 PM

the spontaneous style of this was really cool. i found this to be very interesting reading. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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