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Rach813
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 30
Maine

0 posted 2001-04-17 09:15 PM

When I think of you,
Tears fill my eyes.
I miss what we once had,
I feel a piece of me is missing,
That piece is you.
You were so close to me,
I counted on you every day.
Now that piece is missing,
I sorely do miss it.
I would do anything to again be whole,
To again have you in my life,
To count on you in my everyday life.

A kiss from your lips,
A warm sensuous touch,
A display of devotion,
I want it so much.
When we cuddle,
I feel so complete,
What glorious fortune it was,
For you and me to meet.
You are so special,
Comparable to few,
I think you should know,
I think I'm falling for you.
All I want is to
Steal your heart,
And for us to be together,
To never be apart.
I promise my soul
Will always be true,
If only you allow
Me to love you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-17 10:59 PM

This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it quite a bit!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-17 11:18 PM

This is very sweet! Beautiful words, Rachel. Thanks for the read

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2001-04-17 11:36 PM

Ouch. Sadly, i'm going through the same type of situation. Ouch. I think the worst part is seeing that person at school and having to resist the impulse to run to them. Ouch. Nice poem...try and carryon...it's useless advice...but, it's all you can really do.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-04-18 12:06 PM

omg, that brought tears to my eyes seriously. man rachel, its like your writing them just for me in mind *L* dammmmmm girl!!! LOL GREAT job i love it. i never knew u could write so good!!

Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-04-18 12:18 PM

This poem was EXCELLENT!! but so sad

Great great great job here!!!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-04-18 01:56 AM

this is such a heartfelt poem..sad but beautiful. thanks for sharing it with us.

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-18 11:50 AM

Situations like this are always hard, i hope everything works out. This is a really nice piece, i think that keeping the lines shorter really helped the flow a lot. great job on this, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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