Teen Poetry #4 |
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starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
*Change* When you look at me, I can't tell if its love or pain, I don't know if it means the same. I wish I could get inside your head. Just to know what you think in there. I wish I knew if you loved me too, I wish you still felt the same about me, I thought I could get over you, but some things never change. <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you." [This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Instead of trying to read someone elses mind which could lead to a lot of trouble, why don't you just go ask? Your poems have me interested lately ![]() "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice job, Lacy. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to reading more ![]() --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was very nice!! believe me..sometimes i wish i could get inside of other peoples heads too...that would be wonderful =o) I hope you get you figure these things out. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. Sounds like you're going through a rough time. I hope things get better for you! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea..this poem was nicely written i liked it but...as i see u go thru hardtimes i hope things get better for u also... |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is nice. hope things pick up. if i were you i wouldn't even try to get into a guys mind i swear they're sick and twisted places ![]() why not doing what someone surgested try talking to him. it could help. ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
my mind isn't really twisted and evil... well not really evil... well... ummm... right. great poem, i like this and i hope things get better for you. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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