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starryeyed999
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0 posted 2001-04-17 08:11 PM


*Change*

When you look at me,
I can't tell if its love or pain,
I don't know if it means the same.
I wish I could get inside your head.
Just to know what you think in there.
I wish I knew if you loved me too,
I wish you still felt the same about me,
I thought I could get over you,
but some things never change.


<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

[This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 04-17-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-17 09:26 PM


Instead of trying to read someone elses mind which could lead to a lot of trouble, why don't you just go ask?  Your poems have me interested lately    I hope to see more

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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2 posted 2001-04-17 10:49 PM


Nice job, Lacy.  I enjoyed the read.  Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to reading more  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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3 posted 2001-04-17 11:53 PM


This was very nice!! believe me..sometimes i wish i could get inside of other peoples heads too...that would be wonderful =o) I hope you get you figure these things out.
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4 posted 2001-04-17 11:53 PM


I liked this. Sounds like you're going through a rough time. I hope things get better for you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-04-18 03:52 AM


yea..this poem was nicely written i liked it but...as i see u go thru hardtimes i hope things get better for u also...
katherine
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6 posted 2001-04-18 06:23 AM


this is nice. hope things pick up. if i were you i wouldn't even try to get into a guys mind i swear they're sick and twisted places

why not doing what someone surgested try talking to him. it could help.
~kate

'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.'

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viginia
7 posted 2001-04-18 01:09 PM


my mind isn't really twisted and evil... well not really evil... well... ummm...  right.  great poem, i like this and i hope things get better for you.  keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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