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the one i call friend
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the one i call friend |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
this isnt by far one of my better poems..but it means alot! and its the heart that matters, i wrote it for a friend that always is there for me..but i dunt knwo how to tell her how much i <3 her...i think her passions name is vixengrl hehe so thanx to everyone for reading this..please respond! Shes the one person Who stays by my side Shes the one whom when im depressed Comes along on the bumpy ride Shes the one person To lift me when I fall Shes the one who builds me up And makes me big and tall She puts a smile on my face When the tears are seeping through This person that I speak of Is the one and only YOU You make my day so bright and fun Even when things go down hill You make even the most boring things An absolute cheap thrill When storm clouds are rolling in And the wind is blowing fast You somehow make it better And make the sunshine last. When I get burned by fire Your there to put it out And when you find out that it is all my fault You don’t even shout Your calm and collected Through good times and bad And you never leave me hanging When im feeling sad So thank you for always Being here for me Maybe its not the same for you But I hope one day it will be *cheeseyness* my way of life hehe!!! <3 ~kim~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Yeah, you should shrink that down and put it on a plaque. Kidding aside, it is really not that cheesey of a poem. You're such a sweet friend. I wish I had more chums like you. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
*Behold, the power of CHEESE* Heh. Sweet poem, i hope your friend reads it. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sweet poem! A nice tribute to a friend, and she's obviously a good one. Nice job  --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful tribute. I'm sure she'd love it. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
She must be really special to you. And you to her. Seems like it. Well, you're both lucky to have each other, showing appreciation helps a relationship a lot you know. Whether it be friendship or a dating one. Beautiful tribute. by the way, Where's the cheese  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Thats one sweet poem for a sweet sounding friend. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
Hey Kim... I like this one too. I'm new at this replying thing, but I'll try.It's great and I can't critisize it b/c I suck (at poetry and obviously being a friend...) it's great, I'm sure Nikki will love it. ~britt~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was such a cute tribute! You two are very lucky to have eachother |
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