Teen Poetry #4 |
I Love You For It |
Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
I love you more than any words can say. You make me feel complete. Like I'm somebody. And I can't express my love for you enough. Before you came into my life, I was feeling completely alone. Now, I know I have someone by my side. I'm glad it's you that cares. ...And I love you. I know I can trust you completely... and I do. I know I could put my life in your hands, and know you would do anything to protect it. ...And I love you for it. You've made me open up like no one else has. I can tell you anything without you criticizing me. ...And I love you for it. You are really wonderful, and I feel very fortunate to have you. I'm glad I'm with you. I hope I'll be with you always... ...And, I love you. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very beautiful poem, Rachel. I liked this a lot.. you're lucky to have someone like this. Everyone deserves that special person in their lives. Nicely done I'm looking forward to reading more. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
A part in the clouds of perpetual depression that usually dominates this forum! Could it be? Yes, it is!!! Pretty poem. I hope it doesn't outlast the inspiriation... Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
This is the first I've read of yours, really liked it and I cant wait to see more "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww very sweet!! I liked it a lot |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done. Another wonderful poem by you! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
nice one!!!..i liked this one a lot too!well done!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I liked the format of this a lot, i really enjoyed this. the world is always better with sweet love in it keep postina ll your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Such a wonderful and beautiful poem Rach. My favorite so far of yours. Well expressed feelings. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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