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Rach813
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since 2001-04-17
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0 posted 2001-04-17 09:12 PM


I love you more than any words can say.
You make me feel complete.
Like I'm somebody.
And I can't express my love for you enough.

Before you came into my life,
I was feeling completely alone.
Now, I know I have someone by my side.
I'm glad it's you that cares.
                   ...And I love you.

I know I can trust you completely... and I do.
I know I could put my life in your hands,
and know you would do anything to protect it.
                   ...And I love you for it.

You've made me open up like no one else has.
I can tell you anything without you criticizing me.
                   ...And I love you for it.

You are really wonderful,
and I feel very fortunate to have you.
I'm glad I'm with you.
I hope I'll be with you always...
                   ...And, I love you.


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1 posted 2001-04-17 10:46 PM


Very beautiful poem, Rachel.  I liked this a lot.. you're lucky to have someone like this.  Everyone deserves that special person in their lives.
Nicely done    I'm looking forward to reading more.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Deranger
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2 posted 2001-04-17 11:19 PM


A part in the clouds of perpetual depression that usually dominates this forum! Could it be?  Yes, it is!!!

Pretty poem.  I hope it doesn't outlast the inspiriation...

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

Hand Me Down
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since 2001-04-08
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3 posted 2001-04-17 11:25 PM


This is the first I've read of yours, really liked it and I cant wait to see more

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

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4 posted 2001-04-18 12:16 PM


Aww very sweet!! I liked it a lot  
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5 posted 2001-04-18 12:16 PM


Nicely done. Another wonderful poem by you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
6 posted 2001-04-18 02:10 AM


nice one!!!..i liked this one a lot too!well done!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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viginia
7 posted 2001-04-18 11:53 AM


I liked the format of this a lot, i really enjoyed this.  the world is always better with sweet love in it    keep postina ll your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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8 posted 2001-04-20 11:55 PM


Such a wonderful and beautiful poem Rach.  My favorite so far of yours.  Well expressed feelings.  keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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