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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Okay, this is short and dumb, I was bored in class today though so I was thinking more than is really healthy for me and came up with this. And I've not been around here for quite some time (again) so, yeah ~_~ An enemy is but A friend of a different name For what are we Without those with whome we querral. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
well welcome back!!!! this was very cool...  its nice to see your work again! Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
Looks ok to me. short and simple. Nicely put dragon! sabriel |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Simplicity is a gift...a munk told me that once. No lie.. It's a gift that defies me, but you have carried off well. "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Heheh, I've been told that I have the gift to make things simple... and also the gift to be able to over complicate them. Now, I only lack the gift of spelling but, no matter. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm glad to be back. Hopefully I wont pick up another major project for a while."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice job, Dragon. This is a realistic poem.. simple, short, and sweet. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here! wow....that was a deep thought. I enjoyed it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here! wow....that was a deep thought. I enjoyed it! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*fwaps dopey* bad dopey, no posting twice! anyway, glad ye liked it. Actually, I wrote it when I was contemplaiting the change in the relation with a fellow I know, I've know him for ever it seems, and we were friends, then we grew apart and I _REALLY_ couldn't stand him, so we ended up being enemies of sorts, now that we've bothred matured more, I can stand him... though he's still got a huge ego which is annoying... but *shrugs* I'll live. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I liked this one. It's a rather interesting view of enemies. Sounds kinda like the idea of strangers being friends you haven't met yet.... "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
i love this. it's really cool. so now we've got you back stay a while. keep it up ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Good poem, this is a really interesting thought. great job on this, keep postina all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great read... a very deep thought... safety warning required I think... >>> Warning Deep Poem <<< or is that hole? Anyway short, sweet and very enjoyable to read. <<<_Andrew_>>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I'm so very glad that you liked it it warms my heart in these dreary days of allergies  but, no matter, I'll try and stay, but I'll have very little time for about three weeks due to prior commitments, so I doubt I'll have a lot of time to read other ppl's works (which is what I really love about this site) or to post mine, but, hopefully I'll have plenty to post as soon as my school's spring play closes and I can finaly have a life again. With that in mind, I'll try to stop by now and then though "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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