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0 posted 2001-04-17 05:25 PM


Looking for a safe haven.

Euphoria,
I stand alone,
Amongst a thousand heaving bodies,
Anonymity amongst the crowd,
Identical within my individualism.

Euphoria,
I am a clone,
Music unites us all,
Screaming, shouting loud,
But no one hears my individualism.

Euphoria,
All skin and bone,
Hero, worshipping them
Draped in a shroud,
They can’t see my individualism.

Euphoria,
I’m feeling prone,
Isolated from myself,
Sailing on a cloud,
I can’t feel my individualism.


<<<_ Andrew _>>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-17 06:50 PM


Bad ass! Seriously, this one is GOOD. It is now in my library.
Jon

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2 posted 2001-04-17 07:02 PM


its very awesome....whats euphoria?
Regina

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3 posted 2001-04-17 07:03 PM


its very awesome....whats euphoria?
Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Ina
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4 posted 2001-04-17 07:03 PM


its very awesome....whats euphoria?
Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Ina
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5 posted 2001-04-17 07:04 PM


its very awesome....whats euphoria?
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6 posted 2001-04-17 09:57 PM


*Applauds*

Beautiful poem, Andrew!  One of my favs from you!  The descriptions here are absolutely superb.  Very nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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7 posted 2001-04-17 11:15 PM


You did great, and it looks like regi really wants to know what euphoria means!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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8 posted 2001-04-18 01:32 PM


Ok Regina... Euphoria:- "A feeling of great happiness or well-being"

Thanx for all the replies.

<<<_ Andrew _>>>

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