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Teen Poetry #4

Fly (This is for the new people to see how good i do on good days)

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-04-17 05:04 PM

Sometimes you fly,
Sometimes you die,
Sometimes you make it up to the sky,
Sometimes you fall so so short,
I am one who fell just a little short.

I am so glad that I did not fly up to the sky,
But instead I flew into the arms of you.
You are my angle
The one who will never die
The one who didnt let me fly up to the sky.

I stared at death,
And death wanted me,
But instead your the one who in the end took me.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

1 posted 2001-04-17 05:10 PM

Very kool. I liked it even though it is the first I've read of yours. Nice job.

sabreil

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-17 09:47 PM

Good job branden....liked it much

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-17 10:36 PM

Good job, Branden. Thanks for the read. Keep posting.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Hand Me Down
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 32
WV

4 posted 2001-04-17 11:20 PM

This is the first I've read of yours, and so far i like and I hope to see some more

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

5 posted 2001-04-17 11:27 PM

One of the most important lessons of poetry; the poet writes first for himself, then for the world.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2001-04-18 01:24 PM

Well done Brandon, great read.

<<<_Andrew_>>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

7 posted 2001-04-18 01:43 PM

great work Branden!
nice..nice...nice

regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

8 posted 2001-04-18 02:05 PM

I liked the poem very much it was brilliant! Thanx for the good read!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

9 posted 2001-04-18 04:00 PM

thanx for the great read hun..i liked it!
*~KiM~*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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