Teen Poetry #4 |
Nationalist. |
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Nationalist. One nation, One people, One spirit, Flag, Race, Monarchy, Proud sense of tradition, A reason for anarchy, Nationalist fervour, A rebellious and over active youth, Radicalism, Nationalism doesn’t exist, Rascism, Anarchy cannot rule, Fascism, An apathy. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ok, this one was a refreshing breath of air from your usual format, as I pointed out in another thread of yours. I like the theme to it, the format you used suited it very well... great job, keep impressing me, Zu. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Really great job here. I loved the topic and message. Wonderful job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a really good message! Thanks for sharing.. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i really like the format of this poem. the best way for a writer to grow and use their talents to the fullest extent is to use different formats and styles in their writing. i'm glad to see you using a variety of techniques, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ohh, very nice here. Me liked. Me also liked the new format. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have nothing else to do but agree "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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