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Teen Poetry #4

The opera

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-04-16 08:29 PM

The opera's sounds sooths my soul in a way,
no one could.
It slowly pulls me in until I can't get out.
I get wrapped in it's sweet melody.
It clenses my thoughts and my soul.
I feel like I'm slipping,
Into it's grasp.

Sombody, please, pull me out! I cry.
Then I realize no one is there.
Suddenly I wake up.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-04-16 08:40 PM

Hey,

Nice nuff said

until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-16 09:28 PM

I really like this. I think its a powerful poem, despite the length. I think some of the lines could be broken down into multiple lines, but that's just a picky thing

Very nice job.
Oh, and don't forget to reply to other's poems too

It works both ways.
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-17 03:50 AM

Quite interesting here. I enjoyed this poem very much.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-05-10 10:51 PM

Seems like you were in a good situation
why do you wanna be pulled out of it?
Beautiful write

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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