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Teen Poetry #4

What do you see?......2

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-16 11:32 AM

What do you see,
when you look into my eyes?
What you see, Does it make you want to love me?
Do you see my troubles and my life's tyes?

Or do you see my love for you?
Cause the amount is so big,
it must show in my eyes.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-16 03:56 PM

Good job on this one. I haven't read #1....so I'll do that now.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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