Teen Poetry #4 |
Rape |
princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
I'm angry inside I feel lots of hurt It all went so quick Why did it hurt He left me right after I then felt ashamed I felt it was my fault I took the blame He left me right after He felt a relief He now had hurt me And was unable to thin Those feelings of hurt My feelings inside The pride taken away The unhappiness inside But now I must forget Try not to think What has happened is over My pain is in sink |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
if u really did go thru this....i'm really sorry... hope thing get better 4 u and ur heart...the poem itself had much pain in it... |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is horrible. Not the way it's written!!! did you go through it? i hope not if you did i hope you're ok! feel better ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, If you really did go thorough this I am really sorry. I know that wont help and I wish I could say its going to be "okay" but thats up to you. I hope you stay strong and relize its not your fault. Back to the poem itself it was well done I liked it alot Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very well written poem. It's full of pain and emotion... If this really did happen to you, I am so sorry. No one deserves to go through something like that. It's horrible... *Hugs* I hope everything will be okay. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this is powerful in the sense that this is some serious stuff. I hope to God this didn't happen to you. You ok? I hope so.... |
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