Teen Poetry #4 |
So much better |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
No one can fill this empty space you left behind I’ve got so many words inside, I wanna say to you With every step I take, with every beat of my heart I’ll think of you and the time we spend together It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart That I have to wait so long to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter Wondering if I should call you Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better Remember when we used to be close all the time I’m drowning in tears inside, need you to save me Every door that you close, I will open with my heart For as long as I breathe the love we shared It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart That I have to wait so long to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter Wondering if I should call you Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart That I have to wait so long to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter Wondering if I should call you Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awww thats so sad, but its cool that you have somone that means that much...(funny tho, b.c alot of your other poems are about not having anyone if i member correctly hehe) <3 *~KiM~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this....thought you did well. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done... I liked this immensely. Keep on posting. <<_Andrew_>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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