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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-04-15 09:02 PM

Lost in a sea of green-blue,
Never to drown.
Happiness grows,
My hearts overwhelmed.

Dazing and gazing,
Taking my time.
Forgetting my thoughts,
Let my body unwind.

Sweet sweet symphony,
Playing to the beat of my heart.
Breathing softly,
In a fascinating art.

I often loose my way,
Always end up in this place.
But i'd rather be here,
Then the life i have to face.

Thats one reason i love you,
So much and so true.
Cuz i can forever be enchanted,
By your eyes of green-blue.

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 04-15-2001).]

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

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east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-04-15 09:05 PM

wow that gave me a boost of positive energy lol...good job, and its a cute poem!
<3 kim

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-15 09:34 PM

Hee hee... *has eyes of green-blue* This is so sweeet.

I like the format a lot. Great job on this one!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Attack Ferrit
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since 2001-04-09

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texas

3 posted 2001-04-15 10:23 PM

great poem, chock full of emotion, vitimans, and minerals. (sorry im in a random mood) really a great poem though.

everything is skin deep

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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

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Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-04-16 03:01 AM

this is really good! so sweet.
~kate

'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.'

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-16 11:52 AM

LOL.. vitamins and minerals?
Heh. Very nice poem you've got here. I liked it a lot. It's a very positive outlook on things. Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-16 03:45 PM

Awww so sweet. I liked this shugar. Unfortunately I have light brown eyes with circles of green

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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7 posted 2001-04-16 03:48 PM

Great poem... I liked it loads.
<<_Andrew_>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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anonymous albert ?

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8 posted 2001-04-16 04:34 PM

great job!!! i liked it

... i really did

LoveBug

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9 posted 2001-04-16 05:10 PM

I am totally with you, girl! The guy has to have the beautiful eyes. I'm partial to blue eyes myself. It's easy to lose yourself in a pair of beautiful eyes... geez, I'm starting to sound like.. well, all of my poems!

Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

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SC, USA

10 posted 2001-04-16 05:15 PM

this was really good...i liked it a LOT! ~JO~

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-04-16 11:03 PM

Thank you everyone for your replies!!!!

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