Teen Poetry #4 |
My heart is a fickle master. |
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
My heart is a fickle master. My heart is a fickle master, Flirts with love every other day, And so I end up in disaster, It’s just some little game I play. I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure, I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure, Dazzled by your beauty, Overcome by your grace, Forgetting I have a duty, I end up in this disgrace. I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure, I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure, I’m reaching out for glory, Can’t accept this fate, I’m rewriting my own story, I’m creating my self hate. I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure, I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure, Betraying all your faith in me, Cheating I know it’s wrong, But I’m not in love you see, And I’ve known that far too long, I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure, I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure, I realise I was in love with you, It’s all those things I miss, I should stuck you like glue, But I ruined it for a kiss. I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure, I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure, <<_ Andrew _>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! I REALLY liked this poem man! VERY VERY good. You wrote it well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It seems like today you've been trying out a few different styles and formats. I really like this poem. The format is GREAT. Very nicely done --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, GREAT POEM!!! this was a wonderful poem, I liked the style keep em' coming -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Yeah!!! What they said... I enjoyed this one very much. "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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