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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“Life” Tiny heartbeats striking anew To look upon this is wonderous to view A new life comes forth, another child is born Within this world Heavens passing grace For life has found another place Ten little fingers and ten little toes Two little eyes And a cute little nose Life begins for this little angel Held within loving arms Kept away from any harm Wonderment shines within everyones eyes A miracle has happened this day With you little one For You Have Life It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awwww....cuteness...i luv babies. good luck if its yours!! hehe <3 ya *~KiM~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
thanks for the reply. and no its not mine. someone at my work just had a baby though. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. I've learned that even when you [This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 04-15-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh, that's good news! And this is a great poem, I love how you organized the last four lines. Very nice! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
babies are funny spesurly fat ones. great job! keep it up ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is a sweet poem. I love babies.. they're such bundles of joy  Nicely done --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was amazing!! I loved it greatly. I really felt that you wrote this well. My fav from you so far.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Cool poem, babies are absoloutely enchanting as is this poem. keep up the good work. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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