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How Do You Stop Loving Someone You Never Really Had?
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How Do You Stop Loving Someone You Never Really Had? |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA 
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How do you stop loving someone you never really had? How do you convince your heart loving him is bad? How do you understand words that were never said? How do you erase the memories that never were made? How do you stop the feelings even when he's gone? How do you make your heart stop calling his name? How do you stop loving someone who although he said so little managed to say everything you ever needed to hear? How do you stop loving something after it is gone? |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I really liked this poem it was powerful, and it made me sad. I know how you feel and my only advice is to keep your head held high. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh, this poem definitely hit a personal spot with me. You expressed a lot of feeling in this piece, it's absolutely superb. I'm very glad to see you posting in here again.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem rocked. Very well written and your thoughts flowed like water. Nicely done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful poem! You expressed yourself very clearly. I haven't seen much of your writing here, so I look forward to reading more. Good job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I advise you never to stop loving, but just to stop...obsessing, I guess. You're prolly not obsessed with da peep but yeah. There's no rule that says you can't love something that's not there..Keep dat head up and keep writing these great poems. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
I really liked this poem. i can really relate to this peice. great poem. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this poem definitely hit home with me. i'm still in the "getting over an ex bf" stage. it is hard no matter what the loss but healing comes in time. keep ur head up!! Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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sinfully_seductive Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 31 |
i found this piece to hit very close to home for me. i thought it to be well done. i'd love to give you some advice, but i'm still trying to figure it all out for myself. again, i enjoyed this read. same-sex couples are like kama sutra - beautiful but misunderstood! |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. Good luck in future writings. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this one hit me hard...maybe cuz i relate to it...its something that youw ant but never did you have...this mad eme sita nd think about the feeling i have...wonderful job on writing this ...bye Chelsea  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
What hit me about this poem was the word choice. Good job. I wish I could answer that question, but alas i'm only an ignorant teen. "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
i know how you feel. i try to get myself to stop loving a girl i never had but i can't. i want to stop loving her because of the pain you get from not having her. it hurts. i totally understand your need. i love this poem SOOOO much. its da bomb!! :b love always, dana p.s. keep writing! :q |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*SNIFF SNIFF* Oh, wow. I think I'll say that again: OH, WOW!!! I don't know why I think I'm the only one in the world hurting right now, but before I read that, I thought that no one knew what I'm going through. Excellent writing, and what a way to get your thoughts/feelings out! I wish I could express my thoughts/feelings like you expressed them for me. Oh wow oh wow oh wow! Don't stop writing at all, okay? Wowowowowowow!!!!  Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
i had to come back and tell you WOW again. so "WWOOWW!" i loved it so much!!!!! okay i think i'm done. bye- dana |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wow thank you everyone. Knowing I'm not just stupid and can't get over him helps me alot. It's good to know you're not alone! *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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