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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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If your ever feeling alone and need comfort or care i'll always be the one to stand by you you know i'll always be there the sun may not be shining there may be clouds above but for now until the time of time i'll be sending you all my love. When you just can't take the pain and your thoughts have passed by there will always be my shoulder for you the moment you begin to cry the birds may not be chirping but we will never be apart because i always want you close to me, deep down inside my heart. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful! WOW.. i really liked it. lucky is that person to have a person like u.lol yea..great job on another poem..  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-14-2001).] |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweeeeeeeeeeet poem. Awwwwwwwww Thought you did just fine here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I'll ditto Javi's "Awwwwwwwww" on this one. Great job. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so sweet! I hope you gave this to the person you wrote it about! Nice job --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very sweet poem, also very supportive!!!! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
this is the kinda poem that could be given to an awsome friend or a specail person to ya..good job, whoever u wrote this for, should feel great !!! " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you and jbaker are obviously the romantics of the forum  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
She and Albert are obviously the lovebirds of the forum.   |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Omg, this is so sweet. I absolutely love it! Supportive and sweet, what a combination! Great job here. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
allan..? you trippen man. we're jus close friends!! lol and i believe this poem was for hmmm.....   but y u keep acting like that........   ...?[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-19-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm just teasing you man. Give it a rest. Everyone knows there's nothing serious between you two. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!! "end of dialogue" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-19-2001).] |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
isnt there....  .. :O ...LOL j.k |
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