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Jess714
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0 posted 2001-04-19 08:21 PM


Why did it have to happen to us?
We lost one another
We gained one another
It may have taken a long time
But now we have each other
We will soon be happy together
So let's all be happy.
I know that I am

There has been so much
That has been lost
We have went through so much to get each other back
The hard times
The sad times
We just need to forget what hardships and trouble we have been through
It is really hard not having you here right now
It makes me sad
To not see you day after day
And to talk to you day after day
I miss you deeply
And love you a lot
I wish that I could be there right now by your side
So much has happened
So little time
Finally we get to be whole
And be with each other day after day
Night after night
It will be so great
To see you again
And to be sisters over again
We get a long, we love each other
And lets not forget that I love you a lot!!

This poem is for my sister Rach813, my mom and my dad, and my sister Rebecca


[This message has been edited by Jess714 (edited 04-19-2001).]

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-04-19 08:57 PM


this was a very nice tribute..
i thought u did a really good job on this.the message was sweet..hope they got the message that u wrote for them..keep writing

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[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-19-2001).]

Rach813
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2 posted 2001-04-19 10:40 PM


Jess that is such a good poem! I love it so much and I will show the rest of the family! I love you and I can't wait for you to be up here! I miss ya girlie!
Love Always
Rachel

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3 posted 2001-04-20 02:09 AM


Great job here. Beautiful poem for your sister.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-04-20 12:12 PM


very beautiful poem for your sister.  Hey, we all go thru trying times in our life, and when we get thru it, that's what makes us and the relationship stronger

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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5 posted 2001-04-20 12:55 PM


This is such a beautiful poem.  I know what you mean here, becuase I have a sister and I know that there have been times when I have felt this way.
Very nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-04-20 07:33 PM


This is just beautiful!  It's very nice to see a pair of sisters joining Passions in Poetry at once.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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