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starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-04-14 01:38 AM

Dreaming of you all day and night
just doesn't seem right.
I don't want to be the only one,
feeling like i do.
Maybe you should make some effort too.
This won't work if I'm just loving by myself.
You have to give back to get any,
So just pour your heart out to me.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-14 01:43 AM

nice! short but went straight to the point. i liked it.keep writin

princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

2 posted 2001-04-14 01:57 AM

i loved it!
keep up the GREAT work!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-14 03:00 AM

I'm in this same situation. I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2001-04-14 10:10 AM

I liked this one a lot, you put your thoughts into words very well. Hope things turn out peachily!!
~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-14 10:32 AM

This is short, sweet, and simple... and a pleasure to read

NIce work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-04-14 06:48 PM

Best wishes, I did enjoy this one. Short, but the message is profound.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

7 posted 2001-04-14 06:54 PM

Hey,

Great job! Short, sweet, and great

until your next wonderful poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-04-14 06:54 PM

One thing...Show him this poem

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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