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princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-04-07 08:39 PM

You are the golden sunshine in my life.
Your face is beauty and splendor to me,
And when I am with you there is no strife.
You give me a love that I cannot see,
And it is just like the air that does flow.
It is real, unaltering and alive,
And it follows me wherever I go.
To make life wonderful you always strive,
And to enjoy love 'til the final date.
Your spirits can make me rejoice in you,
For there is not the slightest bit of hate.
But freshness that reminds me of the dew.
this is my dream to my lover and friend.
This is my dream that will last 'til the end.

[This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 04-07-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-07 08:49 PM

*applause!!*
This is an outstanding sonnet, Sarah, and a marvelous demonstration of just how powerful and skilled a writer you have become!  I truly was touched by this poem, probably one of your best you have written.
I haven't even written sonnet yet, and I guess you beat me to it, and really impressed me quite a bit!
I'm adding this to my personal library... it's just total magnificence.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-07 09:25 PM

nicee....ummmmm...really nice

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2001-04-07 09:34 PM

I'll ditto Allan's outstanding, and also a ditto to Albert's entire reply........VERY nice job, girl...
~Carly

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-07 10:05 PM

Nice job, Sarah! This is a beautiful sonnet.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --emily Dickinson

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-08 02:25 AM

Wonderful sonnet and beautiful pic.
I really liked the sonnet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

6 posted 2001-04-08 09:50 AM

Hey,

I am speechless

you did a great job and everything they said

until your next

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-09 12:49 PM

Beautifully written! this is a really excellent sonnet. keep writing and posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

8 posted 2001-04-14 02:13 AM

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-14 06:52 PM

well done Sarah
Im defenitely loving this piece
i do hope you write more sonnets
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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