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Starr
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since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

0 posted 2001-04-12 01:47 AM

I've been away for a long time..... too many complications in my life but I now, I'm over that and I feel like a new person with a smile.

My darkest fear, lurks in the shadows,
I search for it in the darkness,
But I find nothing.
I wondered why, I cannot find what I fear,
But this wondering gets me no where
So, I search in the shadows once more.
This time I see a shining light
I went to it and I picked it up to see
But it was only a mirror.
When I looked at it I realized,
That my darkest fear....... was me.

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-12 01:59 AM

nicee i liked it .keep writing

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-12 04:22 AM

This poem was written like it was to the point. Seems like you had a realization while writing it....I liked it....hope things get much better!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-04-12 10:54 AM

Great poem, I really liked the way this one was written. If we all thought about it, we could all be our own darkest fear sometimes.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

4 posted 2001-04-12 11:23 AM

Thanx for the replies.....
And yes Dopey I did have a realization,
I found it and conquered it. I took control of my life and now..... I'm NOT looking back!!

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-04-12 12:37 PM

It sounds like you've made some really important discoveries and that things are on the way to getting much better. i'm glad to hear it and i look forward to reading more of your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

6 posted 2001-04-12 12:51 PM

Hey,

I am glad your back I have not had the pleasure of reading your work until now and its great. I hope you start posting more often. Until your next great poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-04-12 06:18 PM

Congratulations on your victory.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-12 06:18 PM

Congratulations on your victory.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-04-13 11:23 AM

I'm sorry that you've been having a hard time, but it seems as though things are looking up. I hope that's the case. Nice job on this one. I look forward to reading more..

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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