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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
IF ONLY! Everything I have done I regret, I put it all behind me try and forget, I think I could have found a way, If only I didn't see him everyday. Everything I see is so sad, or full of violence, red and mad, I would change this if I could, If only my life was full of good. Everyone I touch I push away, usually because of the things I say, it's so hard to trust and love again, If only someone would get rid of men. Luv Debi xXx  |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hehe i love it!! very cute, didnt really think that the last line was comming but way to turn a more serious poem into a light one!! good job <3 *KiM* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
But...but...*pouts*...but then *I* wouldn't be around...  Great job in venting. I enjoyed this poem even though I am a man.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I hope this was just a vent. The world needs men! I did enjoy the poem though.... hope to see you around here more often. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
no men???????????????? then no women also...wait what am i saying men need women so..yea that shouldn't happen but no men?  |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Thank you for all your replies! I dont mean no men, as not all of them are bad, Just some of them. Luv Debi xXx |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I haven't seen you posting here before, so i hope i have the chance to read more of your work in the future. i enjoyed this one (despite the fact that i am a man. keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Great job  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
haha! No men.. the reaction to that one was entertaining! This is a nice poem. I haven't read much from you, but I hope to read more soon. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This is an amusing ending. I needed a good laugh too. Thanks for the read. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I feel ya!!! Sometimes, they need to just be banished... if only we didn't like 'em so darn much. Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Not all are bad you know.... keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
well i think we need men....lol there some garbage ones out there. but theres the good ones too. awesome poem Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yep, men gotta stay. Nice poem. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hmm i think we only need about 50% of men, the better half atleast. My life would be so much easier if the other half would just disapear Graet poem though, keep it up*dq -=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=- |
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