Teen Poetry #4 |
this is why I am who I am |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
this is why I am who I am this is why you can't change me with a smile with that look in your eye it's because I only walk my own way and I do not look back. This is why my love is unchangeable this is why my life doesn't need to be explained with one word with a things that you've learned it's because i can sit and cry my heart out in a emotional river of pain. Now you know... why I am who I am................................... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
"This is why my love is unchangeable this is why my life doesn't need to be explained with one word with a things that you've learned it's because i can sit and cry my heart out in a emotional river of pain. " I really liked this verse. It was short and too the point. This was a great read. hope to see more. Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A very interesting look into the things that can shape one's character. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"it's because I only walk my own way and I do not look back." This is a great poem with a great message. I wish more people thought this way. Nice job! --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
...heavy.... "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I liked this one a lot! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very interesting outlook thanks for sharing keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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