Teen Poetry #4 |
Truthful |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I've always told the truth, there's only one person I've ever lied to. That was Justin, not you four. So I don't seem to understand why you think I lied to you why you came up to me why you yelled at me. When all I did was tell the truth. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can't say that I really understand this situation, but this poem is well written. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
nice poem, i might have to read it more then once, i also really liked your poem " you taught me" sorry i didn't reply to it. peace out and take care,. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awwww..idnit just the opposite of peachy when people don't believe you?? Man oh man..hope the sit. gets all-good soon. ~Carly NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Good poem here Allysa, but i also was very lost on the topic..maybe write one that explains this one a little better..that would be cool I would like to read it if you did it.. thanks for posting Jeff |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not bad... a short. But it seems like it's something personal so I won't tread there. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
im sorry you have to go thru this, but this is a part of life. hope things are better Allysa ~*hugs*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds more like a vent than a poem. Allysa.......you ok? Need somebody to talk? I'm here.... |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Alright, I'ma write another poem explaning everything, okay, so you all just check it out. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This was short but it got my attention, i look forward to the poem that helps me understand the situation a little better. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Great as always -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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