Teen Poetry #4 |
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Truthful |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
I've always told the truth, there's only one person I've ever lied to. That was Justin, not you four. So I don't seem to understand why you think I lied to you why you came up to me why you yelled at me. When all I did was tell the truth. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can't say that I really understand this situation, but this poem is well written. Thanks for sharing. ![]() "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
nice poem, i might have to read it more then once, i also really liked your poem " you taught me" sorry i didn't reply to it. peace out and take care,. |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awwww..idnit just the opposite of peachy when people don't believe you?? Man oh man..hope the sit. gets all-good soon. ![]() ~Carly NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Good poem here Allysa, but i also was very lost on the topic..maybe write one that explains this one a little better..that would be cool I would like to read it if you did it.. thanks for posting Jeff ![]() |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not bad... a short. But it seems like it's something personal so I won't tread there. ![]() ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
im sorry you have to go thru this, but this is a part of life. hope things are better Allysa ~*hugs*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds more like a vent than a poem. Allysa.......you ok? Need somebody to talk? I'm here.... ![]() |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Alright, I'ma write another poem explaning everything, okay, so you all just check it out. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This was short but it got my attention, i look forward to the poem that helps me understand the situation a little better. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Great as always ![]() -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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