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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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Your eyes I know that when I look into your eyes Really look into those gorgeous blue eyes That everything will be ok In your eyes I see everything that I need Sometimes I feel so hopeless and alone Then I look into your eyes And everything is ok Even when we’ve been fighting And it feels like everything is lost You ask me to look at you And I can’t help but love you For over 9 months I’ve looked into your eyes Whenever I am troubled or upset And everytime I do I realise how much I love you * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is SO sweet!! Very nicely done!  |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awww this was soo cute!!!..... ...except of courseone thing... i dont have blue eyes!!!... hehehe...great poem "Life is not long and boring, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this a sweet poem i realy liked it.great job keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Cool I really liked it. It's great. keep up the good work. Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Sweet!!! in both senses of the word. Until you next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is really sweet. awwwwwwwwwww  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute. Made me smile. <-- Like this.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
geez guys i luvs ya's all! fankx for ur replys, they make me happy! <-- like this!Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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