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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
"FOOD" cow brain sandwiches; now for pig cheese; Rocky Mountain Oysters; the intestines please? some shrimp for later; fish eggs for now; snake on the side, tongue from a cow. grease filled bacon; butter out’a the tub; slaughtered cow; mouth watering grub. By: Dana Samples 4-24-01 |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very different from what i've seen from u but still interestin'nice job keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*puts on a bib* YUM! I enjoyed this....really....really i did!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
whew....this is ummm well, not what I'd want for breakfast LOL......good none the less...  SEA |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
*grabs a fork and a knife and starts to chow down on the brains* yummy then need a bit more ketchup but they are good none the less oh and btw i really liked this poem lol *he sayd while brain matter falls from his mouth ben redshaw the great i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............  ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very different, but sounds delicious. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Ok... hmmm... good rhyme scheme and lineation... and cute in a very odd way, but very BAD food choices *LOL* YUCK... makes me want to RUSH to the kitchen and raid the fridge... barely *LOL* no offense!! Thanx for the entertainment "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 04-25-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Vegetarian, by any chance?  |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
yeah pretty much. the only meat i eat is chicken, and thats because i'm from kentucky. lots of love, dana |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. there goes my apetite... Haha! Very interesting, Dana.. I must say, this is different from the others you've written, but thanks for sharing! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Food-mmm yummy. Food is definitely my other passion (poetry coming first) but I've never thought of combining the 2 together. This one, however, didn't make food like all that appetizing. LOL. I give you an A+ for creativity though. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I am so glad I didnt eat lunch, cuz it would be sitting in my lap right now. I am guessing you are against eating animals. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was good, I like the effect it produced, actually how you produced it, but great job on it "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Well. Interesting describes it well. Yucky thoughts stem from this one, kind of the point tho. Huh? Keep writing!! Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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