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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-26 02:27 AM

Is yours

The strength of your hands
The warmth of your arms
They tell me how much you love me
The look in your eyes
It tells me how
you gave so much up to love me
And when everyone’s gone away
I will always still remain
And forever I will know
Just how much you love me
So I want to say
Forever my love
Forever my heart
Forever my life
Is yours

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 04-26-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-26 09:43 AM

beautifully said

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-26 10:34 AM

nicely written
on the emotion u felt in this poem..

i liked the...

"Forever my love
Forever my heart
Forever my life"

keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-04-26 01:40 PM

Hey,

Awww this is so nice I enjoyed reading it

Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-26 06:11 PM

This was great. Your feelings for this person are great and I'm happy to see this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:24 PM

For some reason this struck me as a spiritual poem... does it have religious signifigance, or is it about a person?
If you'd rather not mention that's alright, but I'd like to know.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

6 posted 2001-04-28 04:38 AM

thanks for your replys!
Allan - it's actually written for my gorgeous boyfriend!
Luv always Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

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