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You Taught Me (also posted in DP3)
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You Taught Me (also posted in DP3) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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(This thread has been closed. If you'd like to reply, please click the following link- ) /pip/Forum46/HTML/000549.html You taught me how to love, you taught me how to smile, you taught me how to live, atleast for a little while. You taught me you're the one, you taught me heart and soul, you taught me to love, everyone, young and old. You taught me how to cry, you taught me how to care, you taught me how to know, that you would always be there. You;re still there beside me, but it's no longer what it was, and somehow you can't see, why, how, and because. You taught me how to love you, but then you let me go, and I will go on loving you forever, this you'll always know/ Til you come back to me, and realize that I'm here, I was there all along, and you taught me how to care. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. Life's tough, get a helmet. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This was bittersweet, and had a lot of emotions tied into it that you expressed very well. The flow broke off in a couple places, but overall it was very well written. keep writing and posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'll agree with Frac... however, I am forced to close this post due to the fact that it was posted in two different forums.  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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