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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-04-09 10:35 PM

Built up at the throat
The struggle now begins
The clashing of weapons
between letting you know
and letting you go
with ease

I never said no
Just wanted more
Never minded
all those times
when you asked how far
Keep it on
Let it show
I want it all

Along the lines
and ending points
A new thrill begins
Touch it all
You know you can
You know I won't stop you
I think it too

It's where we all go

But now it's time
to say goodbye
to white kittens and
big breakfasts with orange juice
To quirky jokes
and dirty laughs
To the do's and dares
To 6 hours of Shogun
To the very first smile
To your lovely tongue

We were never afraid
We're still not
Still war goes on
Can't forget why
It's all burried inside
Until next time

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-09 10:45 PM

great job dark!
Woh00!
I enjoyed this one immensly!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2001-04-09 10:48 PM

Really? I thought it sucked. lol Just another poem I rambled off online and it turned out decent...I suppose. I'm in a twisted mood right now. Watch out! lol Thanks!

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too.

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-09-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-09 11:43 PM

Yes, I'll agree this is very good! I really love the last line, and the title is absolutely magnierrific!

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-04-10 08:26 AM

I agree with allan, the title of this one is great (or magnierrific)

i really liked this one a lot, all your work seems to be ending up in my library.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:03 PM

Nice job, Dark!
Just to be picky, there were a few spots when the flow seemed to be a little off to me.
Anyway, this is very well written. Good job.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-20 11:53 AM

Exceptional read Dark!!! Much enjoyed and wanting more

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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