Pictures of you surrounding me.

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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-04-08 02:26 PM

I see you I wanna touch you
but your just another vision in my dream
And when ever it starts to rain
I wanna call you
but I don’t know your name
Now it feels like the bridge from my heart to you
Has been destroyed

I feel you I wanna know you
But there’s no way to hold your hand
And you are like a rainbow
Cause with out you
There’s is no tomorrow
Now it feels like a storm broke my heart in two
Forever more

Every time I look in a beauty magazine
There’s pictures of you surrounding me
Every time I turn on the Television
There you are, you seem like an hallucination

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-08 03:17 PM

Nicely done.......I like this a lot.
It combines with your alias.
Very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-04-08 09:32 PM

Very good here...I liked it lots. Smile!

~Carly

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-04-09 02:09 PM

I liked this a lot. there's a lot in this poem and it is very well written. keep writing and posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-09 08:30 PM

Another great poem from you.. I liked this one a lot. Keep posting! I love reading what you have to share.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-13 07:00 PM

OK now, who's the celebrity crush?
I'd really like to know

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-04-14 01:10 AM

nicely written. good job

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

7 posted 2001-04-14 01:26 AM

i liked this alot. i can totally relate to this. well anyways great job on the poem

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

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