Teen Poetry #4 |
What is a Dream? |
Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I've finally reached 500 posts! Yay!! What is a Dream? Is it that time of sleep where one's mind wanders? Is it the thought of your goals coming true? Is it a reality known to only certain people? What is a dream? Is it a false reality or a sense of truthful bliss? Is it an escape from the truth or a punishment from falsehood? Is it the best things in life or the worst things in death? What is a dream? Is it an annoyance at times that should be exotic? Is it a fabulous vision in a world of chaos? Is it a foretelling of the future or a cruel lie? What is a dream? --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
CONGRATS ON THE 500!!!! and great job on the poem marie i liked it. but dreams to me r peace of mind unlike reality...anyways keep writin [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I had a thought... this would make a great challenge. What is a dream? Quite the profound question... I'd love to try answering it. Congrats on the 500 Marie, you truly do deserve it. You're a wonderful inspiration to all of us and a personal standard that I thrive for in my poetry is getting your approval. I'll talk to you later. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
lets do it. wanna? i'm in and allan guess u also bout marie u wanna try answerin the "what is a dream" question we all ask ourselves? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here! This was quite deep within questioning what a dream is. I think it's all of the above.....but dream can mean two things. 1. A goal... 2. What occurs during sleepy time. So yea....but anyhow. I enjoyed this poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Yet another masterpeice for my library, this is a great poem. Keep posting Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Congratulations, both for your 500th post and for creating a truly incredible piece. everything you write seems to wind up in my library love ya babe, keep writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Gee, 500 seems so long ago, doesn't it? I did this challenge but it's sitting in a word document at the moment. I like the way you go through all the different aspects of dreams. Very well done. be proud of this, chicka. ~AF~ "Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier |
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