Teen Poetry #4 |
Average Girls |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Those girls on TV don’t understand Being 34-24-36 don’t mean a thing Unless you got the face to back it up What is the world coming to? I hear guys complaining about a girl They say she’s “too ugly” -OR- They say she’s got no chest. Isn’t there more to a girl Than her face and her chest? There seems to be a lot of pressure On young girls now Teen guys see the girls on TV And think that’s the “average” girl And refuse to see the girls at schools As the “average” girls Those girls on TV don't know that being 36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless you got the face to back it up [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Tamma babe this is good! i love it because you bring up a very very good point!! Great job Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This has a great message. The flow works really well. This poem is very realistic. Nicely done, Tamma. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, great message Tamma, I really liked your poem. I think you're totally right about everything you said, sometimes we see just bodies, but there are many people who realise that that's not important, that the real importance is what's inside of everyone, man or woman. Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i thought the message in this was a very important one and what made this so powerful. Guys can be really dumb but we're not all like that . anyway, nice job and keep posting Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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dreamer1 12 5 24 Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 150crossing between |
I couldn't agree more. Very well done. dreamer ....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice any principle for the sake of it.... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Now see I'll be honest here......as far as looks is concerned I don't base the average girl by the girls on TV.....I base them on the ugly ones in school haha.....SOooooooo I think that takes me away from your generalization Tamma.... Average is UGLY.....anybody with a hint of outer beauty automatically goes above average......So i think I got my standards in check here. Either that or I'm being a poo-poo head I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
HA HA HA HA HA Firstly, Dopey, I think you need to shut up before someone hits you over the head with a roast leg of lamb. Secondly, I think the poem should become some kinda "Anthem". It was good. Definately good. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Duck dopey duck...hehe good poem enough said -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ugly is average, indeed... but that's a bad way of putting it. Girls are more touchy about their looks, so I'll usually look more in a girl for her personality first, and then take her looks into account. There aren't any below-average people, just above average ones, and ones that are average but often have different merits below the skin. So yeah, I'm with Dopey. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Is the most beautiful girl the one who looks the prettiest or the one who is the prettiest inside... this is not however to say that "pretty" girls are "ugly" inside... or "ugly" girls pretty inside... I suppose what i'm trying to say is that beauty is in the eye of the beholder... it just took more words. Andrew " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Empty tears Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 64 |
I definetely agree that this should be the anthom of all of us TRUELY average girls. Great post! ~Brittany~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Tamma, that's there problem...They won't get anywhere then AMEN to your poem "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
To all you meet look hard and well, for each person has a different story to tell. Thats what I think of poeple. Good job on this poem. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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