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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-04-05 04:22 PM

Where have i been only few people know,
Sick,lonley, people laugh at me like im a show,
Not very funny in my head,
I wish i had the hair on my head,
Cancer but why,
Im only 15,
It runs in the family im told,
Ill find to the end nothing will stop me,
Detrimined i am.

Dont worry its just a poem

i had well where have i been? Playing Video games!!! gosh i need a life a life of poetry i WANT DOPEY AND LAKE TOO EMAIL ME WHENEVER i go way for a long time okay guys...gots lots of poetry to show u.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2001-04-05 04:37 PM

hi i couldnt find out how to change it but its supposed to be

ill fight till the end.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-05 04:39 PM

Hey man you freakin' scared the livin' poop out of me!!!!! GEESH!
Don't do that man!
*whaps you on the head*

nice poem, but geesh!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-04-05 04:43 PM

Hey, it's good to see you back. So "its just a poem"? You freaking scared me too *whaps him again*

Video games? You've been gone so long for video games? Well, good job on this poem. And feel free to email me any time you want with poems

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
Unknown
Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-04-05 05:04 PM

*whaps you on the head with a big ole something or other* *L* my aunt had cancer and i almost started crying when i read this!! geeesh... way to give people a heart attack... i guess that's a sign i should start takin my Bayer *L*

nice poem though

Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

5 posted 2001-04-05 08:42 PM

hey, man this is a pretty sad poem, sorry that had to happen to you, and hopefully your living life to the fullest!! good luck, and oh yeah good peom, but i really hope ya wouldnt do anything like that!!!
<3 kim

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-04-05 09:34 PM

well...that was very scary. but then its just a poem...good.
welcome back.
regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2001-04-05 10:46 PM

  Dun werry, I won't smack yaz. Nice poem ya got heah, and pleeease bring back some o' yer peppiness and happiness..this place is seemin kinda dull to me l8ly..maybe its just me eh? Anywayazz...I'm rellly glad it wuz just a poem.
  ~Carly

Life is an island in an ocean of lonliness, an island whose rocks are hopes, whose trees are dreams, whose flowers are solitude, and whose brooks are thirst.
  ~Kahil Gibran

[This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 04-05-2001).]

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

8 posted 2001-04-05 10:49 PM

Branden:

Good poem. I like your determination at the end. I think the human race needs more people like that. We're not going anywhere. We've no determination.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

9 posted 2001-04-06 05:16 AM

Caner's a scary thing, I'm glad this work is fictional.
It's good.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-04-06 10:18 AM

Whoa.. that scared me! I really don't think cancer is something to joke about like that, but good poem anyways. I'm glad you're back!

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

11 posted 2001-04-06 03:55 PM

LISTEN.....EVERYONE okay cancer is something im afraid of if you know me you know i lost 4 grandparents to it and to top it off i lost a dog to it to and well to all of you people who think this is bad then i appologize but hey ya know its all good and i was letting u guys know if i ever got it i would never ever let go and not fight SORRY hope ya'll still love me

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

12 posted 2001-04-10 05:38 PM

Such a serious illness is nothing to joke around with
but still, I'm glad it's not really happening to you
stop coming in and out and just stay in

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

13 posted 2001-04-10 05:58 PM

Dang, I was trippin' on this one until I got to the end. Glad it's just a poem. Hope to see you around more.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

14 posted 2001-04-10 06:35 PM

Yeah.....
*whaps Branden over the head*
Oh and only Dopey and Lakewalker, huh?
*whaps him again*
Don't make me mad, boyo.....

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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