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xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-04-03 11:05 PM

I know that you love me,
I do know that its true.
I guess no matter how much you tell me,
Theres nothing u can do.
Cuz when i see you with her,
The girl that is your 'friend'.
I feel a pain in my heart,
A pain that i fear will never end.
As strong as our love may be,
I cant last through this.
No matter what you do with her,
Its me whom with i want u to experience.
I know it sounds rather foolish,
Childish in an innocent way.
But i fear when your with her,
Your thoughts of me are hid away.
So i guess i dont know what to tell you,
Cuz i honestly dont know how to react.
I just hate having her create,
Such a damaging impact.
You dont understand all of this,
Think its foolish in a million ways.
So i guess we have no choice.
I'll just keep dying inside and the pain will have to stay.

silvrduck
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since 2000-11-05

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1 posted 2001-04-03 11:10 PM

OMG WOW. ...girl, you hit the nail. lol Great poem! (i love it when you can relate! lol in a way..)
Jealousy is such a lousy feeling. Hope things work out for you!!!! and keep up the great work

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

Low Man's Lyric
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since 2001-04-03

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In a dream

2 posted 2001-04-03 11:14 PM

Wow that really moved me. You're very talented and keep on posting.

"It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-03 11:37 PM

You are insecure. That's what is causing the jealousy. I am just like that, rather said, WAS just like that. It killed the relationship. Funny how you being jealous because you don't wanna lose your man can ultimately cause the loss. Try and work on your insecurities......you have to talk to him calmly and rationally. You have to really communicate with your partner hard on this.....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

4 posted 2001-04-04 08:04 AM

That was a really powerful piece and i liked it especially because i know exactly how you feel. jealousy is a hard emotion to get rid of but you just have to try and give all your trust to the other person. keep writing and good luck.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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5 posted 2001-04-04 11:35 AM

i loved the piece great job and don't worry
as i hope everything will work out 4 u
keep writin' though

Elvenblood
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6 posted 2001-04-04 01:51 PM

Wow, this is pretty good! I realy really like this one!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

AsBurYAnGel
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since 2001-04-03

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7 posted 2001-04-04 04:17 PM

Hey this is really good.I know how you feel and it really is no fun. You will get over it though, i know i did, and everything will be good. good luck.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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8 posted 2001-04-04 08:16 PM

*Sigh* Jealousy sucks.. It's a hard emotion to get over. Good luck.
As for the poem, nice job. Very well written! Keep posting!

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Linc

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The Backstreet Boy

9 posted 2001-04-05 02:05 PM

Hey,

I like this poem great I loved it. The topic well I wont get into that but its a good poem. I have a girl that is a friend and her boyfriend is jealous but thats okay because he will get over it

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-04-06 04:16 PM

Thanx everyone for your replies!! i really appreciate it =o)

Acies

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Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-04-10 05:49 PM

Ouch...I felt that
this is so beautiful
please hang in there

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

keoni
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12 posted 2001-04-10 06:20 PM

I know this one all too well. I had a good friend who I went to school with forever and talked to all the time, and her b/f made her choose between him or me, just cause he was jealous. Guess who she chose? NEways, great poem, hope things get better.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

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13 posted 2001-04-10 06:44 PM

Something I mentioned to Jeff Baker earlier... I think you should place these into stanzas, instead of running it all the way from start to finish like that. Ok?

It would really help the quality of this piece.
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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