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Teen Poetry #4

Meaningful Words

HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-04-04 01:20 PM

I wish you knew
How much you mean
And just how powerful
My words could be
They mean the most
When I speak them
Take it to heart
These words, I mean them
I love you dear
With all my heart
All we need
Is a brand new start
So let's go now
Chase our dreams
Never will we
Ever be found

<3~*Rachael*~<3
*we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are*

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-04 01:33 PM

They mean the most
When I speak them

that is a really beautiful line. nice job, keep possing.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-04 05:55 PM

Yea i liked this poem. Very straight forward and to the point in expressing your feelings for this person. I thought you did well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-04-05 04:49 PM

Yes, great job of expressing your feelings

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
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Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-19 06:40 PM

"So let's go now
Chase our dreams
Never will we
Ever be found"

simply beautiful

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

5 posted 2001-04-19 07:36 PM

i like!

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