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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Commitment has taken up all of my precious time So here I stand on this dead street in this lonely town Praying that faith will hold it’s hand upon my life Making sure that my soul will never fall to the ground Where am I going nobody knows Leaving everything behind Cause I’ve chosen to walk this life on my own. The dark clouds has brought rain and thunder into my heart But still I’m holding on until the sun rises again Hoping the key to my life is still one part Walking down these empty streets wishing that time will turn again Closing my eyes don’t know which way to go |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Hmm.. this is a very powerful poem, lots of emotion. I like it alot. I hope this situation, whatever it may be, clears up for you..  Take care, and keep posting! *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is by far one of the best pieces you've written. It has some nice images and it flows well. Very well done. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Very good poem. This situation that you have doesnt seem very good. hope all turns out. regina keep posting! a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"So here I stand on this dead street in this lonely town Praying that faith will hold it’s hand upon my life" This is beautiful! I hope everything's okay with you. Keep your head up and stay strong. Great job with the poem.--Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Great Job! |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, this is a good work. I mean really good, I love your work - all of it! into the library! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done......I liked it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i hope things clear up in ur life even though i'm lost in darkness also but we can do it right? cool keep writin though |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
a wonderful read indeed. I'm amazed and impressed. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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