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chaz-finn
New Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-04-02 10:53 AM

Love

Love is the passion felt when I watch the sun rise out of the abyss
and greet me every morning whether I'm polite or
not
Love is the peace that overwhelms me when I gently
lay my head down and take a long glance of the sun saying
goodnight
Love is my burning desire to hold someone in my loneliest hours
when the sun summons me and
I can't resist it's depressed
beckoning
Love is the colors that follow me through my life
just to insure that my passion doesn't dry
out

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-02 12:49 PM

The imagery in the piece is truly excellent. This does not fit into the mold that poems about love are generally cast from, which is a very good thing. good work, keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-02 01:42 PM

"love is..." it is so many things. It means different things with every breath we take and with every action. love means something differnt for every person.

Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-02 03:38 PM

I agree with Regina. Love is so many things... the worst feeling ever, and the best, but definitely the strongest. Very beautiful post here. Nice job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-02 10:57 PM

Haha... here's this one.

Yes, I've read it before, I'm glad you posted it again. Great job, I must say... you really do display quite a bit of talent in this piece.
Thanks for registering, hope you have a lot of fun in our family of friends.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

robin-shep
Junior Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 28
northern California, USA

5 posted 2001-04-03 05:20 PM

Hi Charles!! Heh. Yeah, man. Looks familiar to me, too. Keep writing!!

Thanks to Allan and everyone who helped locate a certain missing poem!! Peace.

(I am usually in another forum)
Take care all.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-03 10:44 PM

Nicely done here. I liked the poem. I felt it described a few aspects of what Love is....hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-04-19 06:22 PM

beautiful imagery and wonderful thoughts. Very passionate words...thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Starr
Member

since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

8 posted 2001-04-19 06:37 PM

Imagery & expression was beautiful. I find it very intriguing.... the explanation of love was well done, even though love is one of the hardest thing to explain. Keep on posting.

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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