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Kosetsu
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0 posted 2001-04-01 09:38 PM


Can it truly be?
There is another me,
Trapped inside,
Held inside of me?

Me of mercy,
Me of hate?
Me of life,
Me of bloodied trait?

Can it truly be?
There is another me,
Trapped inside,
Held inside of me?

Me of sadness?
Me of coldness?
Me of pain,
Me of eternal bliss?

Can it truly be?
There is another me,
Trapped inside,
Held inside of me?

Me of a thousand masks,
Me of a single face,
Me of everything,
Me of every race?

Can it truly be?
There is another me,
Trapped inside,
Held inside of me?

Me of power,
Me destined to die,
Me of weakness,
Me to decieve and lie.

Can it truly be?
There is another me,
Trapped inside,
Held inside of me?


(Hey Allen, let's see if you can figure this one out. As a hint, it's an Atlus RPG.)

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

© Copyright 2001 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-02 10:53 PM


Er...... give me a few moments.  
I'll get back to you.... hehe......
Thanks for stirring up the thoughts.
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Empty tears
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2 posted 2001-04-03 09:25 AM


I really liked this post,im sure most of us have felt that way one time or another. Great Job!
~Brittany~

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17
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3 posted 2001-04-03 03:14 PM


    Can't say I'm familiar with those games.  Oh well, good poem though!  

But Final Fantasy...I'm the man...

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

Kosetsu
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4 posted 2001-04-03 04:36 PM


I doubted anyone would get this one. Its from Revelations: Persona. Its this cool modern day RPG about these kids that learn to unlock the power of their Personas; basically, they can use a sort of magic through the use of various inner personalities.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

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5 posted 2001-04-03 10:07 PM


Oh it's about another game hehe. Well I thought it was about you, but anyway....I really didn't like the way the repetition was formed in this poem. It was good, but not your best.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-04-24 08:09 PM


Geez, these games topics are confusing me  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Kosetsu
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7 posted 2001-04-24 08:12 PM


Heh..and this one would be from Revelations: Persona, an Atlus roleplaying game in the popular Japanese Megami Tensei series.
AngelPoet87
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8 posted 2001-04-24 08:20 PM


Hmm, I'll just pretend I didn't see all that stuff I didn't understand and say that the poem its self was great, lol. Good job,
ali

2Good
+2Be
------
4Gotten

Dana Samples
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9 posted 2001-04-24 08:49 PM


i think i will just stick with the poem. you lost me on the game stuff.

the poem was really good. i liked this one a lot.

lots of love, dana

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