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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-31 04:57 PM

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ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

1 posted 2001-03-31 05:19 PM

thats sweet

i liked it!!~jo~

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-31 09:28 PM

Naw, I think this is a demonstration of how far you've come. It was good to read, but you've improved a lot and write much better these days than did you awhile ago.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-03-31 10:09 PM

Hey,

I loved it keep up the great job. Somethings changed in your poetry I wont say what it is but I like it better

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-04-01 12:57 PM

Personally I think it's great, it paints images perfectly in my mind at least and I consider that the mark of a great poet. Keep it up.

>¶ØÊ†<

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2001-04-01 09:57 AM

I really liked this and i felt i could really identify with what you were saying. Keep up the good work.
Andrew.

" War is peace,
Freedom is Slavery,
Ignorance is strength" - George Orwell "1984"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-01 10:31 PM

Not one of my favs by you.......but nonetheless it was a good one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-02 10:00 AM

You have done better work but this is still a good piece. I agree with Allan, you can really see how much you've improved as a poet, so keep posting love.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-04-11 08:53 PM

That was really sweet
must be really special in your eyes

thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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